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    Goku

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    Son Goku`s Forsaken Arrival

    Post  Goku on Fri Dec 30, 2011 9:15 am

    Camera Focuses on Goku in the ring
    Goku`s theme plays as he enters the ring


    Logan:Wow a new guy

    Goku appears in the ring out of nowhere
    Goku:I am goku the most powerful being here.
    Goku:Now lets get down to business.
    Goku:I am here for one reason the Forsaken Championship[/b]
    Chase`s Theme plays as he enters the ring

    Logan:So the Gm is here now.

    Chase:So you want a title shot it is not that easy here you have to earn it.
    Goku:Now listen here I want it you will give it to me or i will destroy everyone in the back even camera men.
    Chase:You will do no such thing.
    Goku:Tell me a reason why i should not kick you in the face right now.

    Chase:One I can fire you.
    Chase:Now if you want a title match you will have to fight many stars to get it.


    Goku:Bring all the challengers u want
    Goku walks over to Chase and slaps him in the face
    Goku:There hope you like the wake up call.

    Goku leaves the ring

    Logan:I would start running Goku before you get fired.

    Chase:Goku you are in the tournament you got it now deal with it.
    Chase leaves the ring
    Camera fades away


    Last edited by Goku on Sun Jan 01, 2012 6:25 am; edited 1 time in total
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    HVGM Edgar Jackson

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    Re: Son Goku`s Forsaken Arrival

    Post  HVGM Edgar Jackson on Fri Dec 30, 2011 3:30 pm

    Instead of doing this:

    Spoiler:
    "Goku appears in the ring out of nowhere

    Goku:I am goku the most powerful being here.


    Goku:Now lets get down to business.


    Goku:I am here for one reason the Forsaken Championship"

    You should put it all together in one speech. Also remember to capitalize the single letter "i".

    Just some words of advice Smile

    Goku

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    Re: Son Goku`s Forsaken Arrival

    Post  Goku on Sun Jan 01, 2012 6:26 am

    thanks edgar
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    Big Man Ting

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    Re: Son Goku`s Forsaken Arrival

    Post  Big Man Ting on Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:51 am

    u need to give colour to chase i think its red, blue of somethnig like that, check the efw staff section, but yh just colour in chase, good rp !
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    HVGM Edgar Jackson

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    Re: Son Goku`s Forsaken Arrival

    Post  HVGM Edgar Jackson on Sun Jan 01, 2012 11:26 am

    No you done it wrong. Razz What I meant is this:

    Goku:I am goku the most powerful being here. Now lets get down to business. I am here for one reason, the Forsaken Championship.

    And not like this:

    Goku:I am goku the most powerful being here.
    Goku:Now lets get down to business.
    Goku:I am here for one reason the Forsaken Championship

    It makes it look rather odd..
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    Taboo

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    Re: Son Goku`s Forsaken Arrival

    Post  Taboo on Mon Jan 02, 2012 8:10 pm

    The camera Focuses on Goku in the ring as his theme plays.

    Logan:Wow a new guy

    Goku appears in the ring out of nowhere

    Goku:I am goku the most powerful being here.:Now lets get down to business.Goku:I am here for one reason the Forsaken Championship

    As Goku raises the mic to speak again .Suddenly Chase`s Theme plays as he enters the ring

    Logan:So the Gm is here now.Buisness is picking up!

    Chase:So you want a title shot it is not that easy here you have to earn it.

    Goku:Now listen here I want it you will give it to me or i will destroy everyone in the back even camera men.

    Chase:You will do no such thing.

    Goku:Tell me a reason why i should not kick you in the face right now.

    Chase:One I can fire you.Now if you want a title match you will have to fight many stars to get it.

    Goku:Bring all the challengers u want

    Goku steps forward so that he and he Logan are face to face.

    Goku: I am a future world champion and there is not a soul in this federation that can stop me.Not even you.

    Goku spits in Logans face and quickly exits the ring.

    Logan:I would start running Goku before you get fired.

    Chase:Goku you are in the tournament you got it now deal with it.

    Chase drops his mic and storms out of the ring and as Chase storms away the Camera fades away
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    HVGM Edgar Jackson

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    Re: Son Goku`s Forsaken Arrival

    Post  HVGM Edgar Jackson on Tue Jan 03, 2012 8:06 am

    Thanks a lot Taboo.

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