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    rewind (stone cold 3:16 debut)

    Post  stone cold 3:16 on Wed Jan 11, 2012 7:32 am

    AND NOW FOR THE REWIND FROM EFW MAJOR SHOW: LOCKED UP...

    The theme "MY WAY" by limp bizkit is played. And stone cold 3:16 enters the arena. walking down the ramp quickly stone cold 3:16 gets into the ring. And poses on the turnbuckle in front of a rather silent crowd that is waiting to know who this new guy is...

    Logan: I heard that this guy calls himself "stone cold 3:16". what a lame guy! just copying stone cold steve austin name and style.


    Marshall: what are you talking about?! look at him he's not bald! he has a long spiked hair. and he wears tall jeans, an opened blue shirt and black gloves in both hands too!!

    Ring Announcer: "The following contest is scheduled for One Fall!"
    Ring Announcer: "Introducing first, in the ring, stone cold 3:16"!
    Ring Announcer: "and his opponent, random guy"!

    stone cold 3:16 stares at his opponet focusing on him only
    stone cold 3:16 gets ready to hit random guy
    and hits him with the forearm executing an strong European Uppercut!!
    stone cold 3:16 grabs his opponent's head
    jumping with a 180° spin to perform a Fantastic Jumping Twisting DDT!!
    random guy HAS A CUT!!!
    stone cold 3:16 tries a pinning maneuver
    Referee starts counting...
    ....1....
    random guy kicks out
    stone cold 3:16 prepares himself in a football stance, aiming at his opponent
    and charges towards his opponent, nailing his shoulder right in random guy's stomach, tackling him, and tossing him down on the mat performing a devastating Spear!!

    stone cold 3:16 is about to perform his taunt
    stone cold 3:16 Raises his middle fingers to the whole wrestling universe executing A Middle fingers raising

    [Special Mortal Submission activated for stone cold 3]
    stone cold 3:16 prepares the leg
    and hits him on the face with a strong Roundhouse Kick!!
    stone cold 3:16 slips one foot in front of the opponet head and another one under his chin, locks his hands behind the opponet head
    performing a chokehold executing Fantastic Stone cold hells gate!!
    stone cold 3:16 keeps his ruthless submission hold
    random guy can't resist anymore and taps out!!

    STONE COLD 3:16 WINS THE MATCH AND DEFEATS random guy!!!

    Stone cold 3:16 gets out of the ring. Walks around the ring talking trash to the crowd and acting like a tough guy. The crowd starts booing him.

    Marshall: A great beginnig for a guy who might become the face of the company or the dominater of it!

    Logan: Don't get so excited from just one win! He still have a long way until he get a chance at any title that is if he's gonna get it...

    Stone cold 3:16 grabs a mic and inters the ring again. the crowd boo him lightly. he looks so serious. and he starts talking...

    Stone cold 3:16: I'm not a special person. I'm not a special person at all! I'm just a normal kid who grew up in a normal house in a normal city.


    the crowd get silent and start listening to what the new guy has to say...

    Stone cold 3:16: but even though I'm just an ordinary guy. WRESTLLNG HAS BEEN MY LIFE SINCE I WAS A LITTLE BABY WEARING A DIAPER!! it means everything to me! I can't live a minute of my life without thinking of it! without breathing it!! without living in it!!!

    Marshall: wow! he uses such big words!

    Stone cold 3:16: And while I grew up watching stupid and boring guys taking all the titles and becoming the faces of the wrestling industry for all these years and getting a lot of attention and respect from lots of people even though they doesn't deserve a single bit of it!! and other guys that are much more talented than them not getting any respect from the fans!! and other guys get so underrated that they are nearly forgotton!!! I feel SICK of what wrestling has become...

    some guys from the crowd start cheering for the guy for saying his opinion with clear honest passion. and some guys start booing him for disrespecting their idols and the wrestling in whole...

    Stone cold 3:16: and I wish that I can CHANGE something in wrestling in the future. but until that time comes I'm gonna test myself , my abilities and my skills in front of true wrestling fans. and see their reactions, and hear their opinions. and this show right here is exactly what I'm looking for!!

    a heavy mixed cheering and booing from the crowd starts. and some guys start "who are ya?!" chant...

    Logan: who the hell is he to say something like that?!!!


    Stone cold 3:16: MY NAME IS STONE COLD 3:16. be sure to remember it. cause one day you'll be surprised of what I have achieved and became. and you'll never relize that until you see that stunner comin at ya!!

    Stone cold 3:16 drops the microphone on the ring floor. exits the ring. walking slowly down the ramp while talking trash to the crowd and in front of the camera. before he poses at the top of the ramp with both his arms raised and his back to the camera and the audiance. and then exits the arena...

    Marshall: nice save! wouldn't have expected him to answer the "who are ya?!" chant with something like that! what do you think of him logan ?


    Logan: I think he sucks!

    Marshall: you should really watch your tounge budy. cause "you'll never relize that until you see that stunner comin at ya!!" is what he said.


    Last edited by stone cold 3:16 on Fri Jan 13, 2012 12:41 am; edited 1 time in total
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    HVGM Edgar Jackson

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    Re: rewind (stone cold 3:16 debut)

    Post  HVGM Edgar Jackson on Wed Jan 11, 2012 3:26 pm

    Very very good RP! But there are a few MAJOR problems. They are Grammar issues and this long match:

    Ring Announcer: "The following contest is scheduled for One Fall!"
    Ring Announcer: "Introducing first, in the ring, stone cold 3:16"!
    Ring Announcer: "and his opponent, random guy"!
    stone cold 3:16 gains the initiative exploiting his quickness!!
    stone cold 3:16 gets ready to hit random guy
    and hits him with the forearm executing an strong European Uppercut!!
    stone cold 3:16 Charges his arm
    random guy parries the Elbow Smash
    random guy rushes drooping sideways to the rival
    and hits the rival with his forearm executing a light Forearm On Leg!!
    random guy gets on the top turnbuckle with a jump and raises his fists to the sky holding them together
    stone cold 3:16 deadens the Double Axe Handle
    stone cold 3:16 gets on the turnbuckle
    and jumps towards his opponent to hit him to the throat with his leg, performing a strong Guillotine Leg Drop!!
    stone cold 3:16 sits on his opponent's back while his laying on the mat
    he grabs him by his chin pulling strongly to perform a light Camel Clutch!!
    stone cold 3:16 keeps his weak submission hold
    random guy escapes from the hold
    [Special Dodging activated for random guy]
    stone cold 3:16 grabs random guy's hair
    stone cold 3:16 lifts the adversary putting him upside-down
    random guy somehow stops the attempt of execution of a Piledriver
    random guy puts stone cold 3:16's head under his arm
    and raises him while falling forward, performing a light Reverse Suplex!!
    random guy grabs stone cold 3:16's hair
    random guy grabs the opponent's head while standing at his side
    stone cold 3:16 wriggles out and stops the execution of a Russian Leg Sweep
    stone cold 3:16 puts his arms around his opponent's head
    and clamps it with strength, trying to submit him in a light Side Head Lock!!
    stone cold 3:16 keeps his weak submission hold
    stone cold 3:16 keeps his weak submission hold
    stone cold 3:16 releases his grasp
    stone cold 3:16 bounces on the ropes
    diving with an powerful Asai Moonsault on Edgar Jackson!!
    stone cold 3:16 performs a forward somersault, towards his fallen opponent
    and slams his leg on his throat, executing a Fantastic Spinning Leg Drop!!
    stone cold 3:16 grabs random guy's hair
    stone cold 3:16 grabs one random guy's arms and spins, swinging him into the ropes, then lunges himself as well
    stone cold 3:16 runs to his opponent
    random guy with huge efforts avoids a Lou Thesz Press Pin execution
    random guy jumps onto his opponent with his feet held togheter
    and hits his face with a light Dropsault!!
    random guy blocks his rival's legs
    and locks them painfully with his own to form a strong Figure 4!!
    random guy keeps his excruciating submission hold
    random guy keeps his ruthless submission hold
    random guy releases his grasp
    random guy crosses his opponent's legs
    and turns his opponent holding an ankle under the armpit performing a light Texas Cloverleaf!!
    stone cold 3:16 escapes from the hold
    stone cold 3:16 quickly gets up and counterattacks!
    stone cold 3:16 goes towards his rival
    random guy wards off a Throat Thrust blocking it with an arm
    random guy gets ready to hit stone cold 3:16
    and hits him with the forearm executing an strong European Uppercut!!
    random guy dives into stone cold 3:16 with a clothesline
    knocking him down executing a strong 3 Point Stance Charge!!
    [Special Blocking activated for random guy]
    random guy puts stone cold 3:16's head under his arm and takes him by his leg
    and throws him behind after lifting him with a violent Fisherman Suplex blocking him to the ground!!
    Referee starts counting...
    ....1....
    ....2....
    stone cold 3:16 gets up and resolutely fights back
    stone cold 3:16 gets ready to hit random guy
    and hits rapidly with his forearm his opponnent's jaw executing a light European Uppercut!!
    stone cold 3:16 Charges his arm
    and hits him with a powerful Elbow Smash instead!!
    [Special Mortal Submission activated for random guy]
    stone cold 3:16 grabs his opponent's head
    jumping with a 180° spin to perform a Fantastic Jumping Twisting DDT!!
    random guy HAS A CUT!!!
    stone cold 3:16 sits on his opponent's back while he's lying on the ground
    he grabs him by his chin and pulls it to perform a violent Camel Clutch!!
    stone cold 3:16 keeps his excruciating submission hold
    stone cold 3:16 keeps his weak submission hold
    random guy IS SCREAMING IN PAIN!!
    stone cold 3:16 releases his grasp
    stone cold 3:16 jumps towards his opponent, lying on the ground
    and lands his leg across his throat executing a Fantastic Leg Drop!!
    stone cold 3:16 tries a pinning maneuver
    Referee starts counting...
    ....1....
    random guy kicks out
    [Special Damage activated for stone cold 3]
    stone cold 3:16 prepares himself in a football stance, aiming at his opponent
    and charges towards his opponent, nailing his shoulder right in Edgar Jackson's stomach, tackling him, and tossing him down on the mat performing a devastating Spear!!
    stone cold 3:16 is about to perform his taunt
    random guy capitalizes on his opponent's distraction and jumps on him!
    but stone cold 3:16 is faster and is not caught off guard!
    stone cold 3:16 approaches the opponent
    random guy wards off a Throat Thrust blocking it with an arm
    random guy approaches stone cold 3:16
    and gives a blow to his throat executing a strong Throat Thrust!!
    random guy dives into stone cold 3:16 with a clothesline
    knocking him down executing a violent 3 Point Stance Charge!!
    [Special Damage activated for random guy]
    random guy clutches his opponent from behind
    and throws him to the mat with a Fantastic German Suplex!!
    [Special Pinning Resistance activated for stone cold 3]
    random guy grabs stone cold 3:16's hair
    random guy puts stone cold 3:16's head under his arm
    and raises him while falling forward, performing a strong Reverse Suplex!!
    stone cold 3:16 interrupts his opponent's attack sequence
    stone cold 3:16 gets ready to hit random guy
    and hits rapidly with his forearm his opponnent's jaw executing a strong European Uppercut!!
    stone cold 3:16 tries to hit his opponent with a punch, but he apparently fails
    random guy parries the Elbow Smash
    random guy dives into stone cold 3:16 with a clothesline
    knocking him down executing a strong 3 Point Stance Charge!!
    random guy puts his rival's head under his arm hooking him by his leg
    and lifts him over his head, throwing him behind performing a powerful Fisherman Suplex and pins him!!
    Referee starts counting...
    ....1....
    ....2....
    stone cold 3:16 gets up and resolutely fights back
    stone cold 3:16 points to random guy with decision
    and gives him an powerful Ear Slap!!
    stone cold 3:16 hurls the leg preparing the blow
    and hits him on the face with a Fantastic Roundhouse Kick!!
    stone cold 3:16 raises his opponent to the top corner and kicks him in the gut
    random guy blocks the opponent's leg preventing the execution of a a Stone cold stunner 3 16
    random guy grabs stone cold 3:16 from behind
    and ...1! First German Suplex connected! And ...2 second German Suplex! And ...3! performing a Fantastic Multiple German Suplex!!
    random guy folds his prostrate opponent's legs
    rolling and connecting with a strong Sharpshooter!!
    stone cold 3:16 escapes from the hold
    stone cold 3:16 quickly gets up and counterattacks!
    [Special Damage Resistance activated for stone cold 3]
    stone cold 3:16 approaches his rival loading his arm
    and hits him to his throat with a strong Throat Thrust!!
    [Special Attack activated for random guy]
    stone cold 3:16 Charges his arm
    and strikes his opponent's face with Fantastic Elbow Smash!!
    stone cold 3:16 raises his opponent to the top corner and kicks him in the gut
    random guy parries the a Stone cold stunner 3 16
    random guy grabs the adversary by the waist from behind
    performing a series of three linked German Suplex, executing a Fantastic Multiple German Suplex!!
    [Special Dodging activated for stone cold 3]
    random guy grabs stone cold 3:16's ankle
    stone cold 3:16 avoids the execution of the a Lethal aggression
    stone cold 3:16 leaps up, spinning towards his opponent lying across the mat
    and slams his leg on his throat, executing a Fantastic Spinning Leg Drop!!
    stone cold 3:16 is about to perform his taunt
    stone cold 3:16 Raises his middle fingers to the whole wrestling universe executing A Middle fingers raising
    WHAT THE HELL!!!!!!
    random guy 2 suddenly shows up, and tries to step inside the ring distracting the referee who is trying to stop him
    random guy gains the intiative back while the referee's distracted
    random guy approaches his rival loading his arm
    stone cold 3:16 wards off a a Throat Thrust blocking it with an arm
    stone cold 3:16 approaches his rival loading his arm
    and gives a blow to his throat executing a strong Throat Thrust!!
    [Special Mortal Submission activated for stone cold 3]
    stone cold 3:16 Charges his arm
    random guy parries the a Elbow Smash
    random guy rushes drooping sideways to the rival
    and hits him with his forearm on the legs knocking him down with light Forearm On Leg!!
    random guy pulls stone cold 3:16 still groggy, by his hair
    random guy clutches his opponent from behind
    stone cold 3:16 avoids being thrown by the a German Suplex
    stone cold 3:16 grabs his opponent by the head
    jumping with a 180° spin making his head crush down with a devastating Jumping Twisting DDT!!
    stone cold 3:16 slips one foot in front of the opponet head and another one under his chin, locks his hands behind the opponet head
    performing a chokehold executing Fantastic Stone cold hells gate!!
    stone cold 3:16 keeps his ruthless submission hold
    random guy can't resist anymore and taps out!!
    STONE COLD 3:16 WINS THE MATCH AND DEFEATS random guy!!!

    stone cold 3:16

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    Re: rewind (stone cold 3:16 debut)

    Post  stone cold 3:16 on Fri Jan 13, 2012 12:47 am

    HVGM Edgar Jackson wrote:Very very good RP! But there are a few MAJOR problems. They are Grammar issues and this long match...
    here you go .. I edited it above .. look at it and tell me if there still are some grammer issues please Wink

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